Samout Actual

This was something I actually really enjoyed! Although I noticed a few grammatic mistakes, the text is something I would call 'decent' :) I felt like I could certainly relate ...

I appreciate your comments! There's actually a mistype in second stanza. It's supposed to go: "Feels like he's not part of this world." But I agree with you both that ...

Not part of this world A world so wonderful, People so lively, Cities so alive, And nature so fertile. - Yet one man, Can’t feel a thing, Not a simple ...

Thank you for your reply Krupp. I'll keep working on this. I may change the first chapter a little and finish it. I just didn't get you opinion on my ...

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